your words capture the moment all alive and brings the same feeling of your's to the reader too ! its defenitely an appreciable work ! but something that i would like to suggest here is to bring a more poetic flow to it so that the poem would reveal the essence to the reader otherwise its a very good piece ! keep it up mate ! and i also like the way tyou explained it so that the reader would assume something else lol
love,
sitaara
this is such a beautiful item !!! it truly does something magical in my body ! its like i revisited the core memory of my 1st love (except mine was one sided) ! its a great work of art, darling ! keep writing and have a great day !
love,
sitaara
*ps:a little support for me from your side would be appreciated (would truly make my soul dance)*
this is a very powerful poem . it conveys the msg of how to actually raise a child and create a sense of belongingness for them . it is simple yet very powerful . keep writing !
love,
sitaara seraphina
this is a really different and a unique one ive ever read the way you rhymed the sentences are perfect it lets the readers grieve in the moment all because of the usage of powerful words ! keep writing naomi ! have a good day !
love,
sitaara
such a pretty play of words it is ! i really appreciate the way you brought the words and expressions to life ! such an art !!! keep writting .
love,
sitaara
oh what an amazing masterpiece you've created ! never has ever a poem dragged me this deep ! expressive verses! love the way you've interwoven emotions within the poem ! keep writng , sweetheart . looking forward for more such pretty poems
love,
sitaara
hey jackson ! this is sitaara . its such a beautiful piece and the feeling of love is captured with the true essence through your verses ! i really love it dear ! keep writing jackson !
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