I really enjoyed this. The descriptions made me really feel what the sneaker was feeling. You described the people who wore him well. All in all a delightful original piece of writing.
I really enjoyed this. I would love to go to anywhere in Europe and I would love to go to a writer's workshop. I'm stuck in snowy Oklahoma waiting for another substitute teacher call. I daydream of places like Venice and Paris. Thanks for the juicy details about hangovers and too much carbs and writer's block.
My first memory is a record my father sent me from Korea wishing me a happy holiday. Your story brought tears to my eyes. Have a happy holiday and may God bless. I really appreciate the effort you guys make to keep us free to have places like writing.com
I really like this because you really feel like Angel is writing this. I would like to read more about Angel. I think you could develop this story into a really nice children's story.
I think this is a great story. I found Christ the day my first son was born. He was so special and I was so grateful that he was healthy that I decided then and there that the Power that gave him to me was special and worthy of all my love and time. I have gone to many churches since then and try to find time to pray with Christ every day. I agree with UW that Christ is the best Friend we can have. He is there when nobody else is. I would like to read more by uw about his wal with Christ.
This was a very readable story. I loved the beginning. I could beleive the character: I felt I knew him. I could understand his frustration. I enjoyed the search he made for his love. The ending was a bit strange, but since I lvoe animals I could totally understand it. All told, a very enjoyable story.
i love this story. It is really inspirational. i want to see more writing from you. More details about your life. You've been through a lot. I want to learn more
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