Very fun! I imagined it being sung with an upbeat rhythm. How nice that he gave his son a drum set! I began playing drums at the age of 11. My mom always telling me that girls don't play drums. Thank you MTV and Sheila E., she inspired me to pick up a pair of sticks, and I've been playing ever since. Music is a brilliant way to inspire, provoke thought and release emotion. I'm glad you shared this story with us, and I hope that the boy is still playing!
Even as a person of faith, I find great humor in the stories of the Bible. What you have done with the Commandments is just amazing. I laughed from beginning to end. I thank you for sharing this with us and look forward to reading more of your work.
I love the repetitive use of the P sound in your work. You made the usual tale of a wedding quite fun and I greatly appreciate you sharing your work with us. As a read aloud series book, I'm quite sure the children would enjoy all the animals and the sounds that some of them made. Thanks again!
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