I think the storyline is really good and I would like to read more of it. But perhaps you might try using a program that checks for spelling and grammar before you post it. Because its very hard to read it completely when you are stopped so often by mis-spelled words. But I will be on the look out if you write anymore on this. ~blessed be
This made me smile the entire time. All I could do was think about our current dog, Deidre. She has this look about her that just says that she is thinking something. And I'm sure given the chance she'd have an earful to say about the tricks we make her go through for the puperoni. So thank you for the sunshine you have given me today. ~blessed be
I waasn't so sure what to expect when I first started to read this, but now... I wish there was more. Sometimes you read things that may have only been put to paper but when you read them, they have such an impact on you that you catch yourself smiling, laughing, crying. It's the real life emotion that true writing brings out that is the best. Also what is fantastic about this is that even though I have only just read it, i feel like maybe its touched something inside me... thank you. ~Blessed Be
I don't know how many times I have been in the exact same place... your poem struck me... touched me. Sometimes the work here is just that, work. But other times its a living being... it breathes and cries and if you listen quietly you can hear its heart beat... it's the work of the Author that makes it that way... yes I think so.
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When you are willing to share of yourself without worry of what others might think and you put yourself out there and lives are changed... just as I was just now. Thank you.
~Blessed Be.
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