MJOEL's (mjoel) Reviews

MJOEL

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15 Public Reviews Given

54 Total Reviews Given

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#4585844

Review of CHILDREN LEARN WHAT THEY LIVE

Review by MJOEL

Rated: E

| (4.5)

this is a great piece Sindbad, the situation children grow up seeing is what determines how they adapt with the environment around them. its a whole story of nurture and nature you covered in a well thought of piece at first eyes kept focused on "if a child "that was on every line but latter I read and the message in every line left me nodding that yes this is a great poet

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#4371475

Review of Before and After

Review by MJOEL

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

life Just like counting 12345....
you only pause to take a breath
but the count is endless
"BEFORE AND AFTER"
Draws a picture of life
the falls and raise
in a poetic message arranged in lines
stanza?
NICE POEM

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#4371470

Review of never thought of that

Review by MJOEL

Rated: E

| (4.0)

LIFE...
having another word in it reading FILE
A file that many will read but only "YOU"
Will understand.
WHO,HOW and WHAT of YOU.
NICE

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#4371468

Review of Hopes and Dreams

Review by MJOEL

Rated: E

| (3.5)

FACTS OF LIFE
LINED AND IN LINE
WITH THE TITLE
"HOPES AND DREAMS"
A POEM, HAVING A BACKGROUND OF REALITY
INSPIRATIONAL, WITH A CLEAR MESSAGE
NICE.
THOUGH NEEDS COLOR WORDS
TO MAKE IT HEART FELT.

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#4349552

Review of Realistic Motivation

Review by MJOEL

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Thanks for the motivation.

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#4347801

Review of My Biggest Milestone Ever Here

Review by MJOEL

Rated: E

| (5.0)

seems I missed a lot on this site
your story is interesting, I also hope to have a story like yours one day.

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#4347179

Review of A Poet Showed Up

Review by MJOEL

Rated: E

| (3.0)

A clear Meaningful message
is all read before drifting off...
you have simple, nice, poem Droid

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#4346125

Review of Pink fluffy unicorn (structured)

Review by MJOEL

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I liked the rhyme.
which isn`t a crime
it is in line
with what am to about to say.

the rhyme made your poem perfect

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#4346115

Review of Intemperance- Chapter 1

Review by MJOEL

Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

keeps suspense
I just wanted to rush through but the suspense and narration was is great I found myself reading it all.
this chapter I have read shows me that "Intemperance" is indeed a great novel

10

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#4345314

Review of Fill in the Blanks

Review by MJOEL

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Once upon a time there was a world that only existed in word-Not even a single one of everyone had ever seen this world, they only smelt its beauty in word. Everyday stories about were told and they never missed any ear of everyone. One daygtg what was in word became a real world, many things in it were created by word until finally even man was created.