I must say that I am not much for science fiction but I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. You are a very gifted writer with the ability to bring a story to life and engage your reader from the very beginning. I find myself wanting to read more and find out what is going to happen to Athenais as the story progresses. I will be following your work. Please continue to write. I'm new to this site and am still figuring out how everything works but I'll be back!
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