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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I loved this story, it could use some better punctuation, but we all make mistakes...especially me. I thought it interesting that you used characters from Halo. I'm not a gamer chick, but even a dumdum like me would know what Halo is. :)

p.s. What do Sangheilis look like???
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