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Review of Lust.  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
The whole poem sounded well. The imagine of an angel bleeding onto a grave is the image that stuck in my head. The details were very nice. Overall a great poem.
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Review of Means so much  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
The lines reconnecting with thee and such sweet ecstacy sound well together. Very emotional.
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Review of Hopelessness  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The poem sounds dark compared to being a long wait. The details were good.
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Review of Come Back To Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The emotions were there a little bit, More work could of been done to have more details in it.
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Review of Vulpes Vulpes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The descriptive features of the fox are very creative. Describing the intelligent creature of the fox. The ryhme scheme also works well with the poem.
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Review of The Life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A deep meaning behind this poem, I love the lines "Love they say is one, To love one needs life" Nice poem.
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Review of Trapped  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
The imagery of her clothes created a realistic look to me. The word choice are nice and profound.
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Review by Tivoi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I would love to help you write one.
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Review by Tivoi Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
The futuristic background of this story, made me want to read it even more. The wording and imagery is there. I would love to see a short movie created after this. Nice job.
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Review of Selfless Bastard  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The description of fear is very clear. An improvement would be that there would be more imagery in the part where a person is looking into the mirror at themselves.
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