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Review of The Dinner  Open in new Window.
Review by dawn Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

good feeling too tired to cook you have a race with the pooch he's winning my neighbors dog is like that and my brother's pet dogs.
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Review of Writing.Com 101  Open in new Window.
Review by dawn Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I K IVED IT BUT IT SEEMED MORE OF A CHORE BUT AS TIME PASSED YOU LAMENTED BACK TO THOSE YEARS.
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Review by dawn Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed it you really loved your dad my parents also passed on and I like that you brought up belief in Jesus Christ you chose to think of the good.
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Review by dawn Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
its ok I try to respect your views I think what I would do if I had that problem or you could have stated your opinions with no ill feelings.
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Review of She wanted him  Open in new Window.
Review by dawn Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I LIKED IT BUT I HAVE NEVER BEEN IN THAT SITUATION I CAN IMAGINE IT WOULD BE VERY HARD I CAN SAY MEN ARE CUTE BUT I LOVE MY FIANCEE VERY MUCH.
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Review of Hare Trigger  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I lost this before its very good I liked the part of the hare it could have been a rat or beetle
transula too I liked you had people running may write a longer part 2
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Review of Have To Believe  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed the poem I think he wants a reason to get up. I LOVED IT I WRITE POETRY TOO I WOULD ENC OURAGE YOU TO CONTINUE
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Review by dawn Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
STORY IS GREAT,IT HAS HOLIDAY MEMORIES OF GRANDMA ROCKING HER GRAND CHILD TO SLEEP FAMILY PITCHING IN GRANPA OFF TO WAR
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Review of Boys in Blue  Open in new Window.
Review by dawn Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It was good it reminded mr of an affair where he didn't tell his girlfriend he was married and one of them tried to kill each other. Harry I think is the policeman.
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Review of The Fun House  Open in new Window.
Review by dawn Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

The fun house seem very good the two people were scared by the transula.
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Review of Locked away Love  Open in new Window.
Review by dawn Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I liked it very much I saw it as some situation that can and does happen even though it's wrong women use children as leverage against the other partner.
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Review of Waging A War  Open in new Window.
Review by dawn Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed it I've never had to make that choice thank god because as Christian we are supposed to love and forgive everyone have you fought a war I wish you luck.
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