let me congratulate you what a great story at first I thought it was just another 2012 end of the world theory but it was a lot more the story is well written I never lost interest and the little comic you put in it was great I lmao with the line "A tweet! A tweet! My kingdom for a tweet" but the best thing by far was the main character John Young it was a believable character and easy to relate to just one thing that bother me you never say what country or who exactly was behind the attack other than that it was amazing
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