I like how well your free verse flows. Excellent attempt at free verse and exceptionally excellent as it is your first attempt at poetry.
Keep it up.
Mimulous
I loved this poem. It made me wonder what I would leave behind and whether I'd done enough in life. Very thought pervoking.
Well done and keep up the writing.
Excellent. I really love this poem. I could feel myself speeding up my reading as it went from soft and gentle descriptions of the first half to the lust of the second. I really enjoyed this poem and thanks for the read.
Mimulous
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