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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Wow, good work on this piece. Its very captivating with an exceptional hook at the beginning. I loved your approach. You are well on your way to finding your voice as an author.

Your characters are well developed and the plot is very interesting.

There a few minor techinical errors that can be fixed in just a couple of read throughs.
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