This is a great piece! I like how it tells you to go with the flow and shows you how problems will be solved by just relaxing and going with the flow. Very nice!
This was great, very creative. It felt kind of rushed but still very good, it could be a novel with a few additions. :) Keep up the good work!
Also, is your name Brom after the storyteller from Eragon? I love those books.
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