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Rated: E | (2.0)
I like that very much. A comma after "magnolia" would help. Damn good effort though.
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Rated: 18+ | (1.5)
Gosh!

First the formatting needs to be dealt with. I have this as a 'centred' document, you need to justify it to the left. Revied the over frequent use of 'ceramic' to describe the floor/walls. I wasn't sure how 'cords' could stand out on his writs and neck.

You did manage to write a gory and vivid description of self mutilation. Well done.
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