The flow of your piece was good. Nothing I read really stood out to be fixed. I could follow it pretty easily. Spelling is great, no mistakes to my knowledge. grammar is also good. I like the idea of a snowflake being the main character, very unique. I could easily picture snowy orchard in my mind and picture snow falling. Very pretty. Over all I really liked your piece. I really hope you keep up the great work.
Interesting. Your story is really interesting. You did splendidly with the detail and explanations. Your paragraphs hold a lot of information, and it is held together, which at times gets hard. You did a great job, and keep up the good work.
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