Three simple words and a world explored. I love how you define the need, want and experience of true love. This is touching, romantic and honest. It's real and raw. I so love poetry that can move me emotionally. I want this in my life! How very lucky you are to share your words. Thanks and Write ON!
Michelle
In case you are wondering who I am....I used to be a very active Member of the Paper Doll Gang and I wanted to come back and visit some of the newest members. I hope you are enjoying Hannah's gang! It's a great place to get to know the Writing.com community.
I love poetry that speaks to the heart. That can tell a story and leave behind an emotion. I felt that with this and as well as your note at the bottom of the poem. Poetry is a magical thing and I hope you spend more time working with it and playing with words. I am not New to the Paper Doll Gang, many moons ago I used to be very active as a member here. I am still in love with poetry and glad that Hannah is still running her awesome group! Thank you for sharing your talent.
I love an honest poem that can talk about what is important in life. It sure don't seem like you are asking for too much but in reality finding someone is difficult and it takes time. The best part is that you know what you need and that will bring you closer to your goal. Good luck and thank you for sharing your talent and wishes with Writing.com
I love poetry that can show movement and heart. I think this is so sweet and tender and almost unrealistic which is sad in a way. I agree with you last line. Passion is how you make your world make sense and poetry is how I express mine. Thank you so much for plugging your poetry. I have no suggestions to make it better. Please keep writing!
Okay I am thinking this is about sex but hey I could be wrong. If not that is ok but to me this is pure pleasure to read and interupt. I like a poem that takes me places and lets me feel. I did feel this which was pretty cool. Thanks for sharing it and welcome to Writing.com!
I am a huge fan of romantic poetry. I love to read something that puts me in a dream like love state. This is it and the last stanza is my favorite. I love the line the lifetime between us, to me that says so much! Great work and thanks for sharing your talent.
I wanted to read this because you plugged it and because I happen to love Psychology and self improvement is what I do for a living. I really found this interesting but wanted to know your personal point of view. I am wondering if this was a class assignment? If yes, what class???
I found this to be very interesting because I think we all carry a monster inside. I was kind of hoping to find out how your monster tormented you but I guess it never leaving you alone would be it. I was wondering if this was about mental illness? One of my favorite topics next to love. Thanks for your sharing your words!
I love poetry that speaks to my heart and I have been in this poem. I have felt this way and might always. It is a true gift to give from the heart even if it won't ever make sense!
I wonder and I get it. I love poetry that can take you some place or show you something wonderful. I am kind of a stickler on the letter i. It should always be capitalized. Otherwise I would have given you more stars. Keep writing and sharing your soul in poetry. the more you share the better and more you have to give.
It's always nice to come across one of your romantic poems and be inspired by your poetric heart. Thank you for sharing and I am glad you were highlighted in the newsletter. Your poetry ROCKS!
Wow girl excellent writing! I couldn't have wrote it better and I am trying! I am living proof that the bipolar mind is a beautiful thing. I live it. I work with it and I parent it. I wish you well on your wonderful journey of understanding yourself.
I love poetry that I can feel. I love poetry that I can relate too and feel something loving coming from the heart. Poetry that is heartbreaking is my favorite. I am such a sucker for a true romantic heart. Thank you for sharing.
Wow! What an image you paint with your words. I could almost feel the darkness get heavy. I love emotional poetry. I also am one that believes depression and dark thoughts can really happen. So great job of sharing your world.
Joel you were a cute brown mouse and I laughed out loud! What an enjoyable read!! You have such a great way with the creative writing, even if it was all true. LOL
Write on and Thank you for sharing the joy of the season with me!
I am not on here as often as I used to be and my muse has left me, so I went looking for some inspiration and found it in this amazing poem...Or is this something so much more? The makings of a great novel or one that has already been written? You take a very simple questions and answered it in a million different ways. Now I am need to look around more and see what I can find! Thank you for sharing and Write ON!
Wow I couldn't agree more! Depression alone is bad enough but when you add the attitudes of so called loved one's you get a different view. I think a lot of things need to change with the whole idea that if you suffer from any kind of mental illness you must be of fragile mind and I don't agree with that. I think if you have any kind of mental illness you are one lucky person. I just have a different view on mental illness and I always will. Thank you for sharing your words and Write on! I wanted to visit your port because you were so kind with your review of Shellyville.
I think I was a part of this challenge many moons ago and I remember how much I loved it! I am so excited to think this is back in action. Count me in!
Thank you for sharing your time and talent and congrats on the new book!
I don"t know what it is you can't forget but I go get that is wasn't nice. We live with our past even if we try to forget it. Sometimes we just can't get away. I hope your journey takes you toward better days!
So a diary entry is this all you have? What was the crime and the girl? How did she pay???? Dang you have the opening of a wonderful little story, were are you going with this and can I come along???
Welcome back to the writing world. I really missed you!
Hugs,
Michelle
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