I found your words very moving. Taking me from one thought then another. They're very depth of something very internal. And for me it took me to a place of question. Had I been on that pole before or too long even? I want to thank you for your great works. Keep Surprising us with your works for they are grand!
Wow. This is very good. I really would love to see more of this story. It makes one really think of themselves. Makes one look at themselves and go? What do I think of me? And then go, what am I doing? Is itthe right path? Though I was bit unsure the nature of the works in the start. But that for me only added to the mystery. Keep on with your works. It very good.
Well done! This piece is very good. I thought it was well wrote and executed. It gave me a sense to want to better myself. As well as seeing where your self improvement has begun! Again. well done!
Your works here are really good. Bliss, Happiness, Suddenness all covered in such a way that it made me tear up even. Keep on writing for your works will reach many hearts.
Nice work. I truly enjoyed the story and its meaning behind the hidden saddens. I actually would of like to see it continued a bit longer. Very good works
Interesting beginning here. Would like to see more of the story. I do see a few punctuation errors and few grammar ones. But Over all this is pretty kewl. Very nice.
Wow This was really good. I do hope its part of book your are writing for it draws you in and you just want to keep reading to find out more. Well done. Wonderful works here, Thank you for sharing your piece with us. Its really good.
Very nice. Well done. Did see one little typo I think. But I think over all its rhythm is nice. Flows well. Content is well put together and informs us of its meaning.
Wow. This is incredible. It hit all my emotions. Drew me in. I do hope you continue his journey and we all are lucky enough to continue to read your gift fallowing his journey.
Thank you greatly for sharing your find talents and thoughts.
I can see you there in each others happiness. Your words revel in that day's events. Your writing tells that story greatly and draws in the reader to the moment.
Thank you for your great works and sharing with us.
Shaking head. I have no words that would come close to the humor of this if you've ever had a flooded house before! This is surely the only way to see it!
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