I like the idea of a poem as a self-introduction and greeting to the community. Clever, quippy--about writing to a bunch of writers who will appreciate it.
I like the maze/amaze rhyme/pun--followed by ablaze to keep the rhyme alive. (though I question the comma that two words before ablaze.
I agree that sometimes the versifying of an idea takes it places you wouldn't have gone otherwise.
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