YESSS! I loved every stanza! I thought that it all just made sense and flowed together awesome! Not to mention the topic I just loved the adjectives you used to describe itt!
This made me blush just reading it.. this is awesome! I loved it!!!! I love how you take something so normalfrequent and turn it into somthing that seems like soo much more!
I think that in life friends. family and faith are all that get you by... thats all you need. I live by that but I've noticed with friends and family comes drama no matter who they claim to be... I liked this one a lot as well!
This one is my favorite so far.. I like the fact that it was actually a real experience, the experience is horrible but i think poetry just has more meaning when its real... AWESOME poem!
That is exactly what depression is in a nut shell, I've think everyone has experienced depression at least once in there life... and you really did an awesome job =]
AMAZINGGG! Your work is truely amazing.. the way your words flow together along with the meaning behind the poem is beautiful. You should be very proud to be such a talented woman.
WHOA! Reading this poem brought tears to my eyes.. I can definitely relate as well as others... you are SUPER talented, and this is one of my favorites... =)
I think weve all felt this way some time in life... I just wanted to tell you that you are an amazing poet... and they say to have love and lost, then have never loved at all... obviously, that person had never been in love. Your poetry is VERY moving.
This was very different and quite unique if I do say so myself. The page says a lot about the person....their interests, likes and dislikes....it's very informative and a great place to lay it all out on the line!!! Thank you for sharing!
Oh wow! This was so well written and VERY interesting!! I usually don't read stories or chapters too much, but out of the few I have read so far, I would have to say that this is the best one I've read. It was a great write! Thank you for sharing!!!
OH MY GOD THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! A WONDERFUL POEM FILLED WITH AN ARRAY OF EMOTIONS! I TRULY THOUGHT IT WAS OUTSTANDING! THE WRITE WAS FREE OF ERRORS AND BURSTING WITH TALENT...I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR WORK!
This write sent shivers down my spine! What an awful experience! I cannot believe the pain in the write! The horror of the event is felt with every line. It is a remarkable write that I will not be able to get out of my mind for a long time. I feel sadness!
Wondeful use of words. I floated through the poem so easily. I love the lines if it would last, I who loves the winds and missed it so. The meaning and flow of the write made me understand the feel that you were trying to convey. It is a great write and I will look forward to reading more of your work!
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