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Rated: E | (4.5)
If you think your rythm is bad, check out mine :)
I liked it, it made me feel a little blue, but I like that too. It made me think of my parents and the end of fall, waiting for Christmas, my favourite time of the year. It feels as if it is about a life well lived, from someone who is finally enjoying being in this world, like...in a see of tranquility. I really don't have enough experience to share on improving, since I'm very new to writing poetry and I need help myself.
I really liked reading it that's for sure. Thanks for sharing with us.
Mia
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