Very deep. I like it. I feel you could help the flow of it by possibly changing a few words...but I really do like it alot. I too, have felt the same in that I hated myself. You are not alone. Hope to hear more from you.
I really liked your work. I can totally relate as well. But I am not a gay man! lol I too, thought of sex related ideas whenever I heard 'Taste the Rainbow' go figure! Ya think it could be a clever ploy to get ppl to be more sexually adventurous?!
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