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Review by Zoe Grace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
I love this storyline. There a few times that a wrong word is used like their, there or they're, quite instead of quiet, and here instead of hear. I think this idea was fantastic.
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Review of This I Believe  Open in new Window.
Review by Zoe Grace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I believe.

I would add the dialogue with your grandmother, the mystery woman and the doctor to break apart the paragraphs a little.

I love this story. It was gripping. I held on right to the end. If it is a true story, which I believe it is, I hope you are in better health now.
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Review of Is Today The Day  Open in new Window.
Review by Zoe Grace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Beautifully written. These are the hopes, fears and excitments of women praying for their turn at motherhood.
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Review of Kite Tails  Open in new Window.
Review by Zoe Grace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Good story. Like the irony.
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Review of FELICITY STREET  Open in new Window.
Review by Zoe Grace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow. I couldn't take my eyes off the screen for a second. You had my full attention right to the end and the surprise ending took my breath away.
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Review of "Footprints"  Open in new Window.
Review by Zoe Grace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
AWESOME! Your words are beautiful.
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Review of "The Real Me"  Open in new Window.
Review by Zoe Grace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
LOVE it. This is me. I am not a poet Short stories are my specialty but this poem is almost definately about me too. Thank you for sharing.
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Review of End.  Open in new Window.
Review by Zoe Grace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Emily sounds a LOT like my neice. I LOVE her and her friend Brett is just too cute. What boy would rather read than go to a pool party, I would love to meet him. I like this story a lot, it felt like I was reading his diary, oh and if it were my neice she wouldn't forgive him for a few days. LOL
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Review by Zoe Grace Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
"YOU KNEW THIS WOULD HAPPEN!" I know you knew you would receive a great review for this! I LOVE it! I actually did LOL at the ending.
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