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67 Public Reviews Given
68 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
Short but very honest
I'm good at...
I relate a lot to love, loss, and pain
Favorite Genres
love, loss, pain
Least Favorite Genres
mythical
Favorite Item Types
poems
Least Favorite Item Types
novels
Public Reviews
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Review of Autumn's Palette  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved this so much! You captured the season of autumn in such few, well written words! Great job!
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Review by Meshellmybell Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very magical! This sounds like it could be the beginning of a great short story. I love how your imagination grabs everything. You added a lot of detail and I really enjoyed this. Thank you!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I love the rhythm and the words. I love that it is prayer in poetry!
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Review of Bullying  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
So true!!!
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Review of Death & Life  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is very very nice....I felt your pain through your words...I believe that reaching empathy from our readers is one of a writers main goals....It is one of mine anyway.....So, well done... mission accomplished
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Review of Leave Me Be  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Thats pretty deep....If this is truly how you feel inside just know it does get better...Even if you see no brightness in your future it exists somewhere..I also can relate because I'm depressed 90 percent of the time, so I know how it feels to not want to live anymore.
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Review of She Who is Lost  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
wow!! Absoutly breath taking poetry. To whom ever you wrote this for would truly be proud. You have a magical way with words. Thank you so very much for sharing this.
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Review of today is that day  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Very vrty beautiful,,,,you wrote this from the absolute deep of your heart and i felt every letter..write on.,please!
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Review of The Quills Group  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I would like to donate 5,000 gps.
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Review of A Game?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I liked the darkness of this poem. I write like this sometimes as well. Most of your rhymes worked. Some of your lines werelonger than others, other than that I enjoyed your poetry.
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Review of Though I Walk  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Very nice. I hope you find who or what you are looking for.
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Review of The Blood  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Again, great. I love to read darker poetry as I am a writer of it myself. I'm also a cutter, so I felt this one. Very deep and very nice! You have a way with words!
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Review by Meshellmybell Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow, I can relate. I freaking love this poem! When my Grandmother died, my Mother sobbed the words " I don't want to be here anymore." Now that I have lost my own Mother I feel the same way. The people with this feeling have their own reasons. To each, their own. Beautiful!
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Review by Meshellmybell Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very strong words. I really enjoyed this. You're very talented.
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Review of Poem For Joey  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautiful!! Your brother should be very proud that he has a sibling like you. Well done. You executed a huge thing in little words.
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Review of Pride  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Very creative!!
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Review of Slither  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Freakin awesome!! I love it!! Keep on doin what youre doin, cause its workin!
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Review by Meshellmybell Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Looks like the player got played. I like your ryhmes they worked really well for me. I'm no expert, very far from it. I think you should space your lines so that it would be a little more easy to read. Other than that, I liked your ryhmes and subject.
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Review of Generation Y  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow! You said it so well. Poetic justice my friend!
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Review of One Less  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow, thats some deep stuff! I really really liked it. Thanks for sharing
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Review of Lost at Sea  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Beautiful!! A dealer with a heart, didnt know they existed!! The need to feed is greater than anyone knows! You wrote this so well, with true conviction. You left nothing unsaid in my opinion. It was very easy to read, rolled right off my tongue.
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Review of Idle Hands  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Again, I love it. You got skills boy!!
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Review of secrets  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I like the words to this a lot! I know how u feel, secrets can really eat away at you and stalk you! Good job, well said.
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Review of Addiction  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I friggin love this!! Rhymes so well and sounds great out loud! The whole meaning, everything, is great. You did an awesome job!!
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Review of Rain  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Short n sweet, yet it describes the rain so well! I really like this!
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