Dear Tim, I have moved by the wisdom behind your work. Indeed you have written a very inspirational, motivatonal piece. I recommend this wonderful piece to all those who are dishearted in life and think their fate is no better. Your work was written in simple language and I must give commendations for that. You could realize that, my review is full of praise. This is because, the wisdom and message your work carries has touch me. Keep it up, Tim! You have given me hope.
Dear author, allow to add my voice of review to your work. The speaker in the story if I'm right, sounds like he 've relocated and is joining a new church. Let be honest with you, the flow in your work wasn't impressive, maybe it could be that english my second language that's why. However you did well on puntuations in the work, it was good. And the ideas which were raised, were also thought-provoking. You've done a great job and I say, keep it up!
Dear Dane, I have been touched by your poem. I must say that your work carries strong emotions. I, however, advice that make your lines clear in poetry. You were impressive, over all. Man can pull 'you' down. Keep it up.
Dear author, I had the opportunity of reading your item titled, "A Family Circle Of Secrets" and below is my thoughts of your work. I would like to first commend you on the way approached your work it was good and also for the tenacity showed in this work. Also your writing is in simple language and I guess it's readership will go far. Let me quickly point to areas in your piece I suggest when looked at will increase and attract more readership interest. The flow in the story was good yet it could have been made subtle to constitue a better story. I also suggest you incorporate paragraphs in your work to make clear ideas you raised. Also I would suggest you do proofreading thoroughly and make some grammatical corrections. Example, a word like 'nothing' in the story was spelt "nuthin". I guess it should be delt with and there are also few others which should be corrected. You did a good job. Keep it up.
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