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Review by Ndimele lucius Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello elisa,
Just went through your poems, short, simple english with ryhmes..
I think poetry is about expression, which you can display at any length..
You can read more poems and notice their wide range of expression..
Keep on writing, you have talent.
Lucius.
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Review by Ndimele lucius Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Tasha I read this poem and said ' am going to be a fan of this poem'. Such a nice short poem. Kudos to you, you have got talent.
chimezie
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Review by Ndimele lucius Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
capt oblivious
Nice piece of creativity. And one begins to wonder, if you wrote this out of fustration, what would you then put down when you are in a fantastic mood? Great work, keep it up and do not stop writing.
chimezie
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Review by Ndimele lucius Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Dear tim
This is a wonderful piece of creative work. May be your pattern requires this, but it would have been nice if the poems had short lines and were in verses in order not to confuse some readers. A ll the same it is a nice piece of poem, kudos.
Lucius a.k.a mele04
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Review by Ndimele lucius Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear Victoria,
What an inspirational poem, nice writng structure. You really got talent. For how long have you been writing?
Chimezie a.k.a Mele04
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Review by Ndimele lucius Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)

dear white guy

Nice story, fine fiction, you could possibly make a movie out of it.
Continue writing, you have a bright future.
Chimezie a.k.a mele 04
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