Great read. Felt I was the proverbial fly on the wall - could 'see' it unfolding. Loved the ending - had an idea it would end this way and yet was drawn along til the last word. Finished the last line and found myself sporting a huge grin. Good stuff. Will be coming back for more.
Mel
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