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Review by meg8 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
i like it. there are a lot of morals. but the ending seemed a bit short. other than that i really liked it. that Max Macho seemed pretty cool. bye
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Review of For You, My Mom  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
perfect. i love it. it is one of my favorite poems i have heard. beauteful! i have no suggestoins. your mom will love it.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
i like the fact that Hunter was an adult and afraid of the dark. Lol. But the descriptions of his day was kind of boring. my favorite part was when he called in sick and the people at his work think it's the end of the world! over all i think this book can go far!
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Review of The Market Thief  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
the chapter that they go to the council place is not as gripping. i think you should maybe add more detail. but other than that, your story has me coming home and getting on the computer. not even doing my homework first. i think this story should get published. it is a great story
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Rated: E | (4.0)
i kind of think you should combine some chapters. they seem kind of short
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