I really liked this. We have all been lied to or have lied to someone and we all know how damaging a lie can be. I don't know anything about the technical side of writing poetry ( I gather there are certain rules) so I won't comment on how it was written only that I think it is very good.
I really liked this story, I could just see these guys getting all fired up about a squirrel, I liked the way I could hear the voice/accent as I read it and the self deprecating way the story was told.
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