Is there more? where is this going what happened in the past whats happening in the future? what are that characters names? what do they look like where are they. this could be a very beautiful story i wish you luck and hope that you complete it so we can know what happens
Awesome i really really enjoyed this and i want it to go on... where are you going with the worms what are they and where do they come from? i thought it was well written and very gripping so please do continue it as i want to see what happens when the worms invade LA. Congrats!
I think that it would be better if this was a longer more indept story, it felt to fast and breezed over mission the emotional involvement of the reader in the story. which despite this it was a very interesting story line and could be something wonderful.
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