Even know the story was long, it kept my attention. It kept me on the edge of my seat. This was also an amazing story because it took place in the future which made it more high- tec and it also reflected on real life events. This story had great imagery, Great job Ally! ( :
I liked how you made it from the cats point of view. I also liked how you put the twist in about the Mayor, and how you made it a hobo in the park instead of some other person. This was a nice story, way to go Kelsey.
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