A wonderfully written story, suddenly connecting the past and the present at the end, an unexpected surprise to me, but it works. Despite the story being a short story I felt invested in the characters, you were able to create feeling for them in a minimal period of time. I found myself rooting for the underdogs, wanting them to defeat the great Alexander but also knowing it was probably not to be. A great job of character building and a great story overall.
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