It makes me smile. I like the idea of buying toys for kids means no suffering.
This must be a fairly personal poem. That's just a guess, but i can sort of picture a life and this poem going profoundly together.
I'm also happy to see that this piece isnt limited to only rhyming. There's a few in there but none of them are forced.
Overall, I think it's a good piece.
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