Hey there and good afternoon! This is a wonderful poem. Perfect in every way...I wouldn't even begin to know how to write like this...It seems like I can do only two kinds of poetry although I have been experimenting. Anyways...I loved the words you chose and the overall feeling of this poem...Thank you so much for sharing your talent with the world...Jodie
Hey there and good morning. This poem is so raw. I love it. There is a lot of emotion attatched to it, and that is always a sign of good poetry. Well done and write on...Jodie
Hi there...this is such a beautiful and inspiring poem. I just love it. I find myself wondering the same things and it is nice to know that I'm not alone...Have yourself a great day...Jodie
Hi and good morning! This is really beautiful. It is also very good at making me think. It makes me question a lot about my character. Anyways...You did an awesome job. Thanks for sharing...Jodie
very, very nice! Hi, I'm Jodie and I'm new here also...I really loved this poem. Especially the part where the sand was dropped and then she tries to find it again. well done
Before I even read that you did this at eleven, I could feel a childlike quality to it. This poem is very well written. I loved how you popped out of bed for just one more look. Enchanting
Wow! This poem literally brought me chills, which I read is communication from the spirit to the body. I absolutely loved it. It was well written, flowed smoothly, and kept me reading the whole way through. Good work!
This poem is so honest and that alone is commendable. A truly inspiring piece of written art. I've never done meth, but I have my own battles I'm facing...applause
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