I loved it! I'm not a patty melt fan, but I would go for it without the cheese. I know, "melt" means cheese, but I have a problem digesting meat and cheese together. So, I would have the patty melt without the cheese and be very happy.
Thank you for your tears. I'm at the crossroads of a new beginning, sad about the past, and fearful of the future. This poem gave me a new perspective and courage to just choose a road and get on with it.
Good one! I was hoping the culprit would be captured and destroyed forever. Alas, the vampire rules again. I always like vamps, especially the ones with memories and feelings about once being human.
That was interesting in that "quiet" has always been the lesson taught from childhood into adulthood. But the rage inside keeps burning. The trick it to express those feelings without anger. We owe it to ourselves to say what's on our minds. After all, this is America, Land and home of the free and brave. We can't keep just talking to ourselves. When we open our mouths, we discover that others are thinking and feeling the same things we are. That's the beauty of communicating. And we can learn how to communicate from others. We just simply have to reach out. It's hard at first, but with practice, it becomes easier and we can learn to perceive the emotions and thoughts of others. Thoughts and emotions have physical properties. They exist in the physical. Let it out, properly, of course, and see what happens.
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