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Review of The Gift  Open in new Window.
Review by Marni Manson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
I enjoyed this. It was a simple poem, with simple rhymes but it was still very entrancing. It probably could have had a better rhyme scheme, but all and all it could have been a lot worse than it actually was. It was actually enjoyable, as I previously stated. Well done.
Much Love,
Marni
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Review of Elf Story  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This was super creative and I liked it a lot. It had no real plot though, and as it was a good short story I do wish there were more to it. Of course there generally isn't much to elves though, is there? Its good to know there is someone out there who understands the relationship between humans and the folk. Like insects indeed. Very Good.
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Review of Tree Fairies  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (1.5)
I did not like this much at all. I feel like the "fairies" are unrealistic and immature. Not only do I feel like the "fairies" were shallow and childish, like they weren't real in any respect at all. I suggest trying to brush up on human relations before trying to write about the super natural. Also the whole dog pee thing... totally immature.
Much Love,
Marni
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