Overall, I like this poem very much. This poem is vvery well written and it explains the topic in a really good way. I like the way the author described the feelings and the overthinking thoughts the man feels. Another reason I like this poem is becasue i can relate to the feeling the author describes the man has.
Overall, I enjoyed this poem. I like the way the narrator realizes that paying for his mom's cure is a much more wise decision with his money. Also, I like this poem, because I can relate to it, because I am saving my own money to buy a car. This poem was decently written, but the author should expand on their vocabulary.
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