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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a great and rather depressing story that was written in a unique manner. Excellent job. I hope you finish this book you say you are working on, and if you do finish it then I will try to find time to read it.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a very good piece however there is just one thing I want to point out:
In the first paragraph you say "he chortled, glancing at the plastic scar glued to his forehead", but you may want to add something like "in the mirror" because people can not just look at their foreheads.
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