This message is moving to some, some would scoff it as bull**** due to mentioning God, but I am indifferent to the religious aspect, and more so care about the political aspect. Good job to the writer, as well as to the readers, as they saw something worth reading
Wow, this was moving. I honestly didn't think that the author would bring religion into the writing, nor did I think they would end it how they did, albeit the ending was an anti-climax, it was good nonetheless.
This chapter was definitely a good non-choice intro to the chapters beyond this one that I have wrote (well, I wrote SOME of them...) And I sincerely hope this storyline continues, as it seems very interesting. As the chapter progressed, I honestly forgot it was in the Equestria Girls universe where they are human, and I think the chapter is better because of that. 3.5/5 stars... Good job goldscout, good job indeed
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