mangledfairy's (mangledfairy) Reviews

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#3193485

Review of Stone Angel

Review by mangledfairy

Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

This is a beautiful piece of writing. I love the image of the girl clinging desperately to the stone angel in the midst of death and chaos. Your descriptive work is just lovely. Kudos to you and keep writing. I would love to see this expanded.

Keep going!

~April

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#3154950

Review of Peter Pan Syndrom

Review by mangledfairy

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

There are a few typos, but overall the story really captured me. I'm 32 years old and I've always wanted my life to still be as fun as it was when I was a kid. It's horribly depressing in the end, but life is not all gumdrops and blue skies. I like that you dared to go that route...Keep on writing!

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#3154592

Review of Stick & Stone

Review by mangledfairy

Rated: E

| (4.5)

That is quite a lovely flow of words. You most certainly have the gift of making the words work for you...I will check back for more writing from you. I'm excited and hope to read more soon.

Thanks,
April P.

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#3154081

Review of Death's Snow

Review by mangledfairy

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Absolutely lovely. I can't wait to read more....I certainly hope you get around to writing more! I love the juxtaposition of snow and death. You never associate death with white, but death can come in many colors and flavors...

I hope to see more beautiful, dark writing like this!

~April P. (mangledfairy)

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#3154066

Review of Under the Bed

Review by mangledfairy

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Such a classic fear that even out of childhood, it still seeps into our subconscious at times. I love the way this is worded. I love the way the lines "Night-light glowing, shadows growing" flow...The whole thing is so simple, but yet it speaks to the scared child in all of us.

Thank you!

~April P.

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#3146133

Review of Something Wicked

Review by mangledfairy

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Very clever rhymes. It made me apprehensive and then it made me smile...so you accomplished two different emotions out of me. Thanks for reviewing me, also. I accept the criticism along with the good stuff. I want to keep writing and improving. I wish you the best!

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#3146124

Review of A Darkest Sleep

Review by mangledfairy

Rated: E

| (5.0)

So lovely, dark, and simple. I think we all know the fear of the dark and nightmare world. The things that exist beyond our reality or behind a door can make our imaginations run wild. Sometimes you fear both being awake or being asleep. It's hard to decide which is worse. I feel that in this piece.