I really like this and I'm not being biased at all :L I think the concept is very good and it would be a very spooky situation if I was put into it. I thought the description was very vivid and I could really imagine the orange trees and the blood trickling out of the old woman's mouth. I've seen an episode of the simpsons that was about Homer becoming the grim reaper which sort of had a similar premise to this but obviously that was for comedic effect. This on the other hand is a very good creepy story. Now you'd better return the favour :P only kidding.
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