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Review of Lovely Dementia  Open in new Window.
Review by Josie Cloos Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, this is a lovely piece and a wonderful tribute to your great grandmother,Claudette. The respect and dignity that is shown here is almost overwhelming in it's beauty.

What is it missing? Nothing, in my opinion. Though you may consider moving the first paragraph and making it the fourth for continuity. But then again you'll loose the stronger openening hook by doing that.

Alot of help I am, eh?

Peace
Josie
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Review by Josie Cloos Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I meant to post a review for the Expanded Power Revison Checklist but my clicking finger got ahead of my brain.

The Expanded version is a detailed, imformative and well presented article on how to clean up your writing. It's a bit long but reading it will be time well spent for any writer. I highly recommed "The Expanded Power Revision Checklist", to anyone who wants to better their writing.
Peace
Josie
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Review of ORLY?  Open in new Window.
Review by Josie Cloos Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
When I found out Patrick's new friends were the golden girls I instantly laughed out loud. And the ending is cool too. Actually I like the whole thing-keep em laughing, Chinese Democracy.
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