Wow! This is definitely an interesting read! As you suggested in the foreword, I read it aloud and slowly and it was fun reading it thus. I think the technique you employed is very smart but the real meaning of your poem is slightly vague...maybe because of the triple rhyme. Nevertheless, I loved reading your poem!
-Maliha.
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