A good background track to this would be an evanescence song or something :p lol no but this is well craftrd and I wouldn't mind putting ths to film format. Have you already made a videousing this yet? If not, loook into it. :) props mate.
A few speling errors here and there but all in all a very well constructed piece. I like the whole aspect of te systemized lifestyle of a psychiayrist being questioned and at first I thought that it was in retrospect from the psychiatrist's point of view, but I might be wrong. Either way it was enjoyable and short just like I like it :)
I quite enjoyed reading the poetic interpretation of a simple question. [: i really do like when i find good poetry that speaks to me, beyond the letters being interpreted in my head. Thank you.
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