I love the premise of this poem - there are so many times when I feel trapped by life. If I may, I have a few suggestions - do what you will with them.
Line three - perhaps 'Feeling like a lion trapped from freedom by caged doors'
Line four - maybe 'I roam the quarters of my confined space'
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