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Rated: E | (3.5)
The overall ideas are there, however structure is lacking. Separate each individual argument/comparison into separate paragraphs. Additionally, expand more, use direct quotes and example from the texts to provide both eveidence and background information. Try a conclusion, restating your ideas in a way that make the reader think about what you have written, even after they have finished reading. Other than that, a few mistakes here and there. For example 'to' vs 'too', but overall a well written piece
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