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Review of Kirya and Nero  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a fantastic, well-thought out story. I can't wait to see the coming chapters and I'm sure they will be just as enchanting.

Your language in the story is beautiful, and I love how developed the Eraknian culture is, complete with foreign language and entirely different customs. The characters are incredible, and your descriptions are mesmerizing, I feel as if I am standing in the story, a silent observer. Well done, and good luck on the rest of your novella!

PS- Make sure to check out my novella that I will start soon! :)
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The short version is this was a beautiful piece. Keep reading for a long version :)

The language in the story is amazing; vague enough to keep you wondering, but clear enough that after only a little thought you can figure it out. :) Your perspective on this simple tale was amazing, and very intuitive. I'm very happy I came across this story, and I hope you will read the novel I am writing as I start posting chapters!
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