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Review by E_Feather Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This story is really awesome. I love the idea about the curse, it is really special. If you don't mind, I will add some chapters related to tickling since I am not good at writing the stuff about sniffing or licking.
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Review by E_Feather Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Well, totally, this is a really good story. However, I think there are too many choices in the beginning. And this makes the story have too many branches. If it is a 1000 chapters story, it will probably be fine. but this is hard for the position your story is at. Therefore, my suggestion is to focus on one topic for some time then change topic.
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