A well written piece of writing with a Halloween theme, the descriptions put a very clear picture in the mind and I saw alot of potential here. A very well done from me
A very nice start to explain how the infection broke out and explanation on what people would do to end it for themselves. I completely believed that this infection was real and throw into the danger that the girls were facing
I must admit. When you looked at my story I had decided to look at yours. This is a very good short story with excellent descriptions I believe. I can definitely see potential in this piece of writing and the way you had described London was very good. This is a very good standard of writing. I know you can keep it up and show the potential you have writing other stories :)
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