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Review of Dear Thalia  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love that this is free verse but you still seem to rhyme. I love that your muse is making you write even through you don't want too. I think that the imagery is great in this poem. I think that your descriptions are great too. I cant find anything wrong with it and I hope your muse does let you have some time off so that you can review and read here on WDC!!!

Keep On Writing!!!


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Review of A Painter  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Lynda Miller Author Icon, This is review 3 of 3 and its great little rhyming poem. I think it has lots of imagery for 20 lines. I think that you can paint a picture in your head from the descriptions that you have written through out the whole poem. I hope this leads to some of them being published!

Keep on Writing!



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Hi, Lynda Miller Author Icon, here is review number 2 of 3! I think that this a a cute poem that you have written about the wonderful "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" Open in new Window.! I think that it describes the how reviews are done and where they review mostly at. I think that there is imagery in this as you read through it. I love that you used the group reviews as your main point of the poem.

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Review of Skiing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi , Lynda Miller Author Icon, This one of 3 reviews I owe for your snail mail auction winnings! I think that this is a great poem that you have shown excellent imagery. I think that you can picture her slowly going and then speeding up to the fall! I think that this was great that she wanted to give it another chance and started back up the hill again after she was helped up!

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Review of Daddy's Girl  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I think that this was great little story about a daddy's lil girl. I think that it is great that she gets a car when she gets her license. I think this could possibly go on to be something that this bigger and better. It has a lot potential! You could see the imagery and description of the picture that was painted while reading this!

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Hi, jackneigut Author Icon, I think that this was a representation that God works his ways no matter what happens he there to help you through it! I think that your faith is strong and that no matter what everything happens for a reason. I think that this was just a great piece you have written! I could picture everything that you talked about in here.

In my family everytime some one passed away, I would get pregnant be already be pregnant when it happened. Happen all three times with my kids. I lost aunt, 3 grandmas {ex counted}, 1 grandpa...I had a miscarrige when my aunt had died too.




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Rated: E | (5.0)
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! I this is this a great story about your 3 year old grandson that is autustic! I think that you are a great grandmother that loves her lil man and would never let anyone or anything happen to him. I think that it is neat that you are able to cope with his good and bad days he goes through daily. I think that its just awesome! Please come back next round.

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Hi, Laura Leary Author Icon, Thank you for submitting your story about having your baby. I think that this is such a great fight to make sure that you kept your baby no matter what was trying to happen. I think that anyone who fights for their child from day one is a great mom!!! I think that you have great description and imagery in this story! I hope that you try my
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! I think that this great poem about your muse! I think that this is great way to share your muse with the rest of us! I think that you have great imagery and descriptions that paint a picture of your muse!!!

Keep On Writing!



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Hello SHERRI GIBSON Author Icon,

This is review 3 of 3 that I owe you from the auction package you won in the
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! I am glad to see this group is here to help the Newbies here on on WDC! I am glad to be part of this group! I think that this and all your other groups help WDC so much and make WDC a great place to be!! I am glad that you are able to help newbies out with there reviews!!!

Keep On Writing!!!




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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello SHERRI GIBSON Author Icon thank you for winning my package in the
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this is review 2 of three that I owe you!

I just think that this is such a good idea! I am sorry to see that it is temporary closed! I think that you have a great idea that giving back to others. I would love to be able to give a gift to someone when this has open back up again! I love the graphics and do not see anything that is wrong on here! I love that you have a group of others that are helping you with all this when it is running!


Keep On Writing!!




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Review of Sherri's Web page  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello SHERRI GIBSON Author Icon, Here is review one of three that is part of your package from the
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I think that this is great website that you have made for your novels, short stories, poetry and horror stories! I love that you have it as a serene and peaceful that reminds me of you! I think that the angels represents the many sides of your writing ability. This cool that you have a store front where you can buy your books at! I will eventually want to meet you in person even though we lived in the same city for a long time! I will be collecting your books again! I was not able to bring them with me! I miss reading them!!!!

Keep on Writing!!


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Review of Sanctuary  Open in new Window.
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Thank you TJ Marie Author Icon for entering my
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! I think that this is great poem that really shows that you had a true sanctuary when you were a kid. I loved to climb trees and stay in them when I was that age too! I can relate! You have done a great job with the descriptions and the imagery in this poem. I love that you can feel like you are right there watching you climb the as you are going to your sanctuary!

Thank you again for entering the contest! Keep on Writing!!!





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Review of LAURIE STORIES  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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contest! I think that this is a wonderful story about your little sister Laurie. I think you had a few great stories about her as you miss her so much! I think that you have great imagery and descriptions through the whole story! I think that you have put a lot emotions into these stories too!







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Hi N. Alawadi Author Icon you have been gifted 3 reviews from Jeannie Author Icon as part of her newbie package for yoU! I will have to come back and do two more when you have more in your port! You were also give a review package to from the Power Shop Reviews!


I think that you did a great job for a start with this story! I think that you could add a bit description and imagery into this as you read this story! I think your English is doing quite well in your writing! I know spell check is helpful! I think that you have great characters in this! Thank you for explaining what Hookah was, I appreciate!

I will be back to do your other 2 reviews that you were gifted when you have more here!

Keep ON Writing!


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Review of Monsters  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Brittany L. Engels Author Icon, I am reviewing for you as a gift of 3 reviews from ~ IVELTAC ~ Author Icon had won in a package that is given to you as the newbie part of the present



This is great poem that you written about all the demon and monsters in your life. I think that as long as you have GOD there you will have a friend and he will save you from whatever darkness that is pulling you down! I love that you have so much emotion in this poem and that you really are trying to get peace again!




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Review of Black of Night  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Brittany L. Engels Author Icon, I am reviewing for you as a gift of 3 reviews from ~ IVELTAC ~ Author Icon had won in a package that is given to you as the newbie part of the present!


I think that this was a little harder to read but still had the great imagery and emotions as your other two! I think think that this is really great that you write about your dark emotions that you have some where to put them but know there is light to your being when you are in the day time!

Keep Writing!



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Review of Monsters  Open in new Window.
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Hi Brittany L. Engels Author Icon, I am reviewing for you as a gift of 3 reviews from ~ IVELTAC ~ Author Icon had won in a package that is given to you as the newbie part of the present!

This is great poem that you written about all the demon and monsters in your life. I think that as long as you have GOD there you will have a friend and he will save you from whatever darkness that is pulling you down! I love that you have so much emotion in this poem and that you really are trying to get peace again!

Keep On Writing!!!



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Review of Ghostly Calm  Open in new Window.
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Hi Brittany L. Engels Author Icon, I am reviewing for you as a gift of 3 reviews from ~ IVELTAC ~ Author Icon had won in a package that is given to you as the newbie part of the present!

This is a great poem about ghosts not being there but the darkness is there that is so scary like the ghosts being there. I love how this gives you chills as you are reading through the whole poem.

I used to live in a house across the street from a grave yard and we really did see ghosts when it was really dark in the home at night and this reminds me of this time!



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Review of Limping  Open in new Window.
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Hi Brittany L. Engels Author Icon, I am reviewing for you as a gift of 3 reviews from ~ IVELTAC ~ Author Icon had won in a package that is given to you as the newbie part of the present!

I have to say i love this poem! It gives a lot of detail why you are beaten down and limping! It shows that our savior helped see what you needed to see to get back and be able to live again! I think this shows a lot emotions that you have as you are writing this and feeling better! It made me feel better to where I need to go back and look things over too>





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Review of contest entries  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Taz_Koby Author Icon, Thank you for entering my "Invalid Item"  Open in new Window. by A Guest Visitor !

I think that this is a great poem you have written about your son! I love that you used lots of words for the one person that has meant the world to you that can also pass down a precious gift to hopefully for you to hold! I think you have great imagery in this poem! I can see a picture as I read through this all the way through! I think that the repetition of "my precious gift" was a great way to help paint the picture!

I wish you the best of luck in this contest!! Keep On Writing!




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Review of Jenny  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Lazy Writer est 4/24/2008 Author Icon, I want to thank you for your entry into "Invalid Item"  Open in new Window. by A Guest Visitor ! Thank you for your wonderful entry! I have to say that each entry is making it harder and harder to judge!

After reading your last entry, I am glad that god brought you another Precious Gift to have so that you have love all the time! It is hard to get over a loss, but to have another precious gift is the best! I think that your granddaughter will love this as she gets older to really understand that she is a precious gift for you!

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Review of Precious Gift  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Lazy Writer est 4/24/2008 Author Icon, I want to thank you for your entry into "Invalid Item"  Open in new Window. by A Guest Visitor ! Thank you for your wonderful entry! I have to say that each entry is making it harder and harder to judge!

I am so sorry for you lose! That is the great thing about Precious Gifts is that they can be anything and everything you want it to be. Most of time you have to lose something to realize that you had a precious gift. I am so sorry that losing someone had to happen for you to have a precious gift! Just think you will see this child again in many years to come!

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Review of The Gift Of Life  Open in new Window.
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Hi ShiShad Author Icon, I want to thank you for your entry into "Invalid Item"  Open in new Window. by A Guest Visitor ! Thank you for your wonderful entry!

I want to thank you for you entry into the contest! This is a beautiful poem that you have written! I think that it is great that he awoken from the ventilator and was there for Christmas. I am so glad that he is here now and that everything has worked out so that you didn't have to spend Christmas in the hospital any longer than needed!! I hope that every Christmas is a very special one for you every year!

Thank you very much! Keep On Writing!






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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello again! Wolf of Worlds Author Icon this is the 3rd and final review that you were gifted from Dr. Shrink Author Icon in my Precious Gifts Auction!

I wish that I could say that this was turning into an "Stalker" story as it seems more like an "Anthros" short story that has been written into 3 parts. You have increased the descriptions of your characters as you can picture them now as they are described. I think you need to write more so that there is alot more imagery going on as you read through this. I think that you have a very good start to a wonderful story that is just a regular short story. There is not any "dark" spots in either of the 3 chapters to be considered a "Dark Comedy." I hope that you can remember to send these to me to review again and I would like to see what you have written when you add more to these! I would love to read and review them again!

I hope to come back and read more as you add more to this and more to your port! Keep On Writing!




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