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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This poem has a lot of meaning. The last two lines of the second stanza and the third stanza really have a lot of meaning. I also liked how you linked the first and last stanza to connect the entire poem. However, if you are trying to get an AAAA rhyming scheme, the fifth stanza has an AABB rhyme scheme, at least in my opinion. Overall, this was a good poem.
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